Contents draft 1

This is the main story on my contents page it is the same as the front but a different image. There is the story headline and below a quote from the article as well as the page number in the top right

Draft front cover 7

Mrs D

Well done for hitting your front cover deadline. There are some good ideas here. Go back to the criteria you were given and use it to help you improve. Try and use a range of font styles and sizes, your barcode is too lareg and try the cover lines without the background colour. keep up the good work.

Draft front cover 6

This is my final draft it is finished and needs audience feedback so i can improve it for my final copy. I have added a coverline and boxes with coverlines inside them. The colour scheme for my magazine consists of red, black and white. The coverlines are in line with my genre however i am not sure my title is appropriate for my genre as i changed it from rap to hip hop and pop but kept the same title as i thought it would be universal and work for most music genres.

Draft front cover 5

This is my 5th draft and in this there has been added some coverline on the right hand side behind the artist and coverline below the title Power. The coverline below my title is a offer that my magazine will do to help get new and upcoming artist known and start to be recognised. The phone scanner in between the price and the barcode will allow who ever buys the magazine to be able to download that song for free and it will make our magazine popular with the artist who's song we advertise as well as supporting new talent into the music industry

Draft front cover 4

This is my 4th draft this has a barcode added and the price but also the artist has been enlarged and moved so he is more central to the magazine and the title has been moved down so is doesnt obstruct his clothing too much as well as allowing more room for coverlines and other features to be added

Draft front cover 3

 This is slightly more developed than the one below but the alternating white and black coverlines i dont like so i have decided to take them out and work on the bottom one and change the cover lines